Not Use

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A roundel regarding a rejection letter received from a journal for a recent poetry submission.

If helpful, you may listen to me read the poem via the player below.

“Not use”, your note, written back to me
On my poem by which I deduce
That your statement of merit, impartial decree
Means my words are unwanted, no use.

This, my rejection; you mean no abuse.
You’re being efficient not crappy,
Not poetic, just clear, not abstruse.

But these words keep coming, won’t let me be—
Whisper in rhymes, with phrases seduce
To turn the lock, use imagination’s key,
I try to resist, but it’s no use.

© Randall Edwards 2017

9 responses to “Not Use”

  1. Pleasant Street Avatar

    Oh dear…

    I have a few of these. I hope the next is both a word to the positive, and something less succinct.

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    1. randamir Avatar

      Thanks. Brevity is its own for of poetry, I guess. Haha

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      1. Pleasant Street Avatar

        I love your positivity haha! True, a few more words you’d have a haiku

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      2. randamir Avatar

        Yes! How about:
        “Not use”, you reply.
        Without caring. Rejection.
        Never write again.

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      3. Pleasant Street Avatar

        I can not use
        your opinion, falling
        snow on the fire

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      4. randamir Avatar

        Although I guess it should have a nature theme like:
        “Not use.” Cold reply.
        Snow falls in obscurity
        Cold, alone, like me.

        Haha! This is therapeutic!

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      5. Pleasant Street Avatar

        I am cut deeply
        words like arrows find a mark
        birds in their nests sing

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  2. Coulson Avatar
    Coulson

    Philemon verse 11. No use has become “useful”

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    1. randamir Avatar

      That’s a very kind word!

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